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(电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》

文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週三 7月 05, 2017 9:23 am

 

(电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》
Screenplay: America Love Story

作者  徐均赛
Author: Junsai Xu

注明: 第一稿, 275节;第二稿, 115节。此为完整版。
Indication 2: first manuscript: 275 sections;second manuscript: 115 sections. This is a whole edition.

正主题思想
失败者满怀刻骨仇恨,不停顿欺诈,加害,报复,造成了巨大债务压力,迫使成功者深陷怪圈,糟蹋人生,履行偿还,恶性循环,走投无路; 捍卫者则全力以赴地展开拯救,在污染和净化中,在侵蚀和完善中,在堕落和抗争中,把爱情悲剧改变成爱情正剧,从而凸现出了引发疾病丛生的降低生命质量的危害人类发展的重大社会问题。
Main Logline  
The defeatist harbourd the bitter hatred, never stopped defrauding, injuring, revenging, caused a huge debt pressure, forced the gainer to fall deep into a strange circle, ruin her life,discharge a repayment,viciously cycle,be desperately driven;but the defender dedicated himself to launching a rescue, in pollution and purification, in erosion and perfection,in degeneration and contention,changed a love tragedy into a love drama,thus bulged the significant society problem of triggering the sickness overgrowth,reducing the life quality,endangering the human development.

副主题思想
一个时代的困扰纷繁的非常沉重的人生迷惘: 为了移民,主人公无奈与在中国的同居者分手, 并且始终不能与在加国的儿子团聚, 最后竟然还会失去了在美国的妻子;或者是爱情变得残缺不全,悲愤填膺;或者仅仅艰难地维系下来,前途未卜;所派生出来的人性压抑感巨大,以致往事不堪回首,现实很难尽如人意。
Assistant Logline
The life perplexity of an epoch,complicated puzzlement,extraordinary heaviness: for the sake of immigration,the protagonist had no choice but to part with his cohabitant in China,and wouldn’t reunite with his son in Canada from beginning to end, unexpectedly lost his wife in America at the  eleventh hour; or the affection became incomplete, being filled with grief and indignation; or it’s only difficult to maintain the relation, the prospect isn’t cheerful; he felt depressed in humanity, so much so that he wouldn’t bear to think of the past and considered that the reality isn’t entirely satisfactory.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 
情节总览
唐大之呵护乔安娜,帮助乔安娜戒烟,戒酒,戒毒,戒赌,掩盖谋杀未遂罪行,迎战危机时刻,勇报一箭之仇,形成不同结局。
Plot Overview
Dazhi Tang caressed Joanna, made every effort to help her give up smoking, give up drinking, commit to drug rehabilitation, stop gambling, conceal murder abortion crime, engage crisis,avenge by bravery,finally formed different endings.
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Re: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》

文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週四 7月 06, 2017 8:12 am

 

主要人物
Main Characters

注明: 本人已就此片的拍摄事宜,同中国大陆某电影公司接洽。其中,关于演员的选择思路,形成了初步的共识,即准备聘请伊万卡·玛丽·川普扮演乔安娜,切尔西·维多利亚·克林顿扮演玛格丽特, 詹妮弗·黄素·史泰龙扮演凯瑟琳, 玛利亚·安·奥巴马扮演雪莉, 伊万卡·玛丽·川普的女儿扮演艾米, 等等。现在,我们列举理由如下:

1,与政治无关。电影就是电影,艺术就是艺术,美学就是美学,(描写)爱情就是(描写)爱情。

2,信息爆炸时代,科学普及化,艺术大众化,影视日常化,自拍,直播,纪录片,微电影等应运而生,成为时尚。高雅步入世俗。

3,条条道路通罗马,只要有利于电影艺术和科学的发展,就该拓荒触禁,尝试新方法论。

4,此片纪实性很强,无需高超的演技,强调反映出生活本来的面貌。

5,准演员素质好,稍加培训指点,就可参加拍摄。

6,明星搞职业,名人为兼职。在电影市场上,作为异军突起, 名人效应大于明星效应,因此绝对能够引起轰动。

Indication: I’ve taken up the shoot matters of this screenplay with a film corporation concerned in Chinese continent. Inside, we’ve formed an initially common view, namely prepared to engage Ivanka Marie Trump as Joanna’s actress, Chelsea Victoria Clinton as Margaret’s actress, Jennifer Flavin Stallone as Catherine’s actress, Malia Ann Obama as Shirley’s actress, Ivanka’s daughter as Amy’s actress, and so on. Now we list a few reasons:

1,have nothing to do with politics. Film exactly is film, art exactly is art, aesthetics exactly is aesthetics, (describe) love exactly is (describe) love.

2, in information explosion era, science is dissemination, art is popularization, film and television are everyday occurrence. A self-take, a live network programme, a documentary, a micro film and so on has risen in response to the proper time and conditions, become vogue. nobility and gracefulness step into secularity.

3, all roads lead to Rome. We should open up a virgin soil and touch a forbidden zone so long as help develop the film art and science, try a new methodology.

4, this screenplay looks like a documentary, doesn’t need an exquisite acting, emphatically reflects the original life features.

5, likeness actresses have a high quality, moreover cultivate and direct them a little, then they could attend photography.

6, star does profession, celebrity holds concurrent post. But in the film market, another extraordinary army emerges, celebrity’s influence is bigger than star’s influence. Therefore they should absolutely cause a sensation.

一,乔安娜 (欧裔): 美的化身。白肤,金发,蓝眼。曲线奔腾,魔鬼身材,沉鱼落雁。冰清玉洁。坚持维护爱情的纯洁性高尚性美好性。出场时19岁。

二,唐大之 (亚裔): 知识渊博,实事求是,强壮而英俊。在中国是一名记者,来美国成为发牌员。非常强调生命质量的问题。出场时45岁。

三,凯瑟琳 (欧裔): 很像乔安娜的大姐。性格如同清澈的涓涓的暖暖的水。母性十足,挚爱自己的子孙。出场时39岁。

四,玛格丽特 (欧裔): 乱七八糟,品格低下。漂亮而精瘦,坏习惯很多。视表妹乔安娜为情敌,不停地侵害。出场时23岁。

五,克里斯多夫 (欧裔): 先是银行职员。刑满释放以后,迎合玛格丽特,变成策划和帮凶。出场时38岁。

六,唐洋洋 (亚裔): 唐大之和前妻花蓓蕾的儿子。出场时11岁。

七,唐艾米 (混血儿): 唐大之和乔安娜的女儿。出场时是个新生儿。

八,花蓓蕾 (亚裔): 唐大之的前妻。出场时37岁。

九,李水儿 (亚裔): 唐大之的女友。出场时30岁。

十,沃顿 (非裔) : 唐大之的朋友。出场时26岁。

十一,雪莉 (非裔) : 唐大之的朋友。出场时21岁。

十二,怀特菲尔德 (非裔) : 唐大之的朋友。出场时50岁。  
                                             
1.Joanna (European descent):beautiful incarnation. blonde. Curves gallop, devil figure, the most beautiful who would make wild geese to alight and river fish to dive for gaze. As clean as ice and as pure as jade. Insists on preserving the love in purity, nobility, nicety. When she appears at the age of nineteen.  
       
2.Dazhi Tang (Asian descent):being knowledgeable, seeking truth from facts, extremely strong and handsome. He's a newspaper man in China. Becoming a dealer after immigrating into the United States. Highly emphasizing the problem of life quality. His maternal grandmother was the French. When he appears at the age of forty-five.

3.Catherine (European descent):looking just like Joanna's eldest sister on appearance. Her personality is similar to limpid, trickly, warm water. Ardently loving her descendant with all her heart. When she appears at the age of thirty-nine.

4.Margaret (European descent):being out of order, low in character. Beautiful, but being too thin, much bad habits. She regards younger female cousin Joanna as the rival in love. She never stops waiting for an opportunity to revenge. When she appears at the age of twenty-three.

5.Christopher (European descent):originally being a bank clerk. Releasing from prison after serving his sentence, ingratiating himself with Margaret, became plotter and accomplice. When he appears at the age of thirty-eight.

6.Yangyang Tang (Asian descent):the son of Dazhi Tang and his ex-wife Beilei Hua. When he appears at the age of eleven.

7.Amy (Half-blood):the daughter of Dazhi Tang and Joanna. When she appears to be a neonate.

8.Beilei Hua (Asian descent):Dazhi Tang's ex-wife. When she appears at the age of thirty-seven.

9.Shuier Li (Asian descent):Dazhi Tang's cohabitation ex-girlfriend. When she appears at the age of thirty.

10.Wharton (African descent):Dazhi Tang's friend. When he appears at the age of twenty-six.

11.Shirley (African descent):Dazhi Tang's friend. When she appears at the age of twenty-one.

12.Whitefield (African descent):Dazhi Tang's friend. When he appears at the age of fifty.
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文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週五 7月 07, 2017 9:46 am

 

剧情梗概
         

唐大之在长跑锻炼的时候,认识了玛格丽特及其表妹乔安娜。因经常与乔安娜比试身手,于是慢慢地就成为了朋友。后来,觉察到玛格丽特抽烟厉害,还带动了乔安娜跟着模仿,也就萌生出了想断交的念头。
     

玛格丽特和乔安娜暗地里都对唐大之心存好感。所以,受到明显的冷落后,玛格丽特抽烟少了,乔安娜则干脆戒掉,于是大家恢复来往。最终,唐大之与乔安娜由倾慕到携手再相拥。直把玛格丽特气得是七窍生烟,痛楚彻骨,深怀恨意。而凯瑟琳对唐大之表示出了真诚的好感。
  

乔安娜先到上海,与唐大之的前女友李水儿打交道,从而大为领教了中国的婚姻文化,服饰文化,风俗文化等。以后,还特地前去多伦多,见了唐大之的前妻花蓓蕾及儿子唐洋洋。表现出了直面另类生活,在某种程度上,所具有的茫然性,矛盾性,包容性。

四       
婚后的时光亦如流水。唐大之就要求乔安娜到图书馆去阅读。哪里晓得,到了后来,乔安娜变成了酒吧的座上客。唐大之力劝不听,就只好采取手段,叫乔安娜吃不消,最终罢休作了断。
  
五    
乔安娜到超市当上了收银员。生活刚刚恢复了平静,又有罪恶的魔爪伸出,布下为时几年的灾祸。在这期间,乔安娜先后一次堕胎,三次住医院进行戒毒。唐大之始终积极进取。并且,在沃顿、雪莉、怀特菲尔德等朋友的帮助下,竭尽全力来挽救败局。


煎熬苦难总算有了终结。健康的可爱的宝贝的女儿艾米诞生。外婆凯瑟琳奉献全身心呵护外孙女。这深深地感染着唐大之,再加上零距离朝夕相处,双方克制不住吐露心迹,引发出了惊涛骇浪巨涌。


唐大之和凯瑟琳认为,此次风波仅限于解释问题。但出自本能,乔安娜却始终耿耿于怀,不肯放过。为了进行报复,竟然走进赌场,输得一塌糊涂,造成很大损失。最终,致使整个家庭生活,陷入了十分困顿当中。

八  
为了清偿大笔赌债,乔安娜再次进饭店,重操旧业当女招待,但收入不高还款慢,受到债主多次催逼。在万般无奈没辙中,竟然有意识地无意识地参与阴谋作恶勾当。为此,家庭已经出现非常明显的解体危机趋势。


乔安娜是不断犯错,当然有其主观原因。但在这桩桩件件事情发生的黑幕背后,进行作梗使坏加害的始终是玛格丽特。玛格丽特奉行“得不到就毁灭”的恶搞原则,长期图谋捣烂唐大之和乔安娜的姻缘。帮凶则是心狠手辣恶毒的克里斯多夫。

十       
一方面进行了深入的反思,一方面了解到实际的情况。唐大之怒火中烧,奋起反击没商量,利用狼狈太贪婪,设计谋引蛇出洞,实实在在地报了一箭之仇。但即使这样做了,还是形成了已经发生,正在发生,可能发生等三种内容截然不同的结局。

SYNOPSIS

1
When Dazhi Tang was doing his long distance running exercise, recognizing Margaret and Joanna. Because he frequently had the agile competition with Joanna, thereupon they became friends little by little. Afterwards, he scented, Margaret smoked too much herself, and also drove Joanna to imitation along with her.He conceived the idea of wanting to break off their friendship.

2
Both Margaret and Joanna became aware of good impression on Dazhi Tang secretively. Therefore, obviously suffering a leaving them out in the cold, Margaret smoked less, then Joanna straightforwardly quitted smoking. Hence Dazhi Tang resumed his association with Margaret and Joanna. In the end, Dazhi Tang had a strong admiration for Joanna, went hand in hand by both of them, gave Joanna a big hug. The result directly made Margaret fulmination, anguish, furiousness. While Catherine showed her sincere favour on Dazhi Tang.

3
Joanna first arrived in Shanghai, being in contact with Shuier Li of Dazhi Tang's cohabitation ex-girlfriend, thus greatly experienced marriage culture, apparel culture, custom culture, and so on in China. Afterwards, Joanna specially went to Toronto, visiting Yangyang Tang, the son of Dazhi Tang and his ex-wife Beilei Hua. Facing alternative livelihood, she expressed her perplexity, contradiction, tolerance in a certain degree.

4
The time looked also like a running water after marriage. Dazhi Tang requested Joanna to go to library for reading thereupon. Where does know, to the later, Joanna became an honoured guest in bar. Dazhi Tang urged Joanna to quit drinking, Joanna didn't listen. Dazhi Tang had only to take measures, forcing Joanna to be unable to stand. She gave up drinking at last.
  
5
Joanna became a cashier in supermarket. When their life had been restored calmly, the evil claws have unsheathed again, castting a disaster that lasted a few years. During this period, Joanna conducted an induced abortion, three times of the detoxification living in hospital successively. Vigorously Dazhi Tang kept forging ahead from beginning to end. As well as, under the help of Wharton, Shirley, Whitefield, and so on friends, going to rescue a fiasco in great lengths.

6
There's the termination of suffering hardship finally. Amy, their healthy, lovely, darling daughter, was born. Grandmother Catherine took great care of granddaughter Amy in dedicating herself wholeheartedly. This fact had been affecting Dazhi Tang deeply, superadding for together morning and night in a zero distance, both sides could hardly restrain themselves from revealing the true state of their mind. But it triggered off wind, storm, surge.

7
Dazhi Tang and Catherine insistently considered this disturbance as being restricted within the explanation of their heart knot.But from an instinctive reaction, Joanna always held the grudge and refused to forgive. In order to revenge herself for this matter, unexpectedly walked into a casino, lost in a complete mess, caused a lot of damages. In the end, Joanna brought about the whole family life falling into great difficulties.

8
In order to pay off a large gambling debt, Joanna went to restaurant once again and returned to her former career as a waitress. But her income wasn't high, and she repaid slow. Joanna suffered pressing repeatedly from the creditor. In having no alternative or in hopelessness, unexpectedly Joanna deliberately or unconsciously participated in conspiracy, evil, crime. For this reason, the family has already showed the disassembly crisis tendency significantly.

9
Joanna was continually making mistakes, certainly hasing her subjective reason. But these things occurred in the black curtain behind, It was Margaret who had conducted the obstruction, the mischief, the injury throughout. Margaret pursued the retaliation principle that if it's unavailable and it's just destructive. She contrived to pound the marriage which had brought Dazhi Tang and Joanna together for a long time. And the accomplice exactly was heartless, cruel, malicious Christopher.

10
On the one hand, Dazhi Tang proceeded the reflection deep; On the other hand, realized the actual situation. He simmered with rage, rose up by resistance without negotiations, utilized a wolf and a jackal for being too greedy of gain, designed drawing a snake out of its hole, paid off an old grudge really and truly. But even dealing with thus, still formed the very different endings in three kinds of content that has happened, that is happening, that may occur and so on.
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Re: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》

文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週日 7月 09, 2017 8:09 am

 

主题曲:《延伸》
Theme Song:Going To Extend


我们在绿林大道上长跑,
我们在绿林大道上相爱。
你的速度就像流星那样迅捷,
你的身姿要比玫瑰更加娇艳。
突然,你遭受到狂风暴雨的冲击,
完全失去了方向。
而后,我千百度寻觅却依旧茫然,
洒泪离开伤心地。
1
We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue,
We love each other on Greenwood Avenue.
Your speed looks like a fast meteor,
Your figure is more delicate and charming than rose.
Suddenly, you suffered the charge of a furious storm,
You fully lost your orientation.
After that,I sought you by all manners or methods, but being utterly ignorant,
I took a tearful leave from this grieved area.


我们在绿林大道上长跑,
我们在绿林大道上相爱。
你曾经是个健将,
现在靠轮椅代步。
涅槃重生需要顽强,
勇敢者家园在这里。
我的计划绝非是梦境,
明天要你再脚踏征程。
2
We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue,
We love each other on Greenwood Avenue.
You once was an athlete,
Now you’ve ridden a rolling chair instead of walk.
Phoenix reviviscence needs a tenaciousness,
Here is the home of the brave.
My plan absolutely isn’t a dreamland,
I ask you to step a new journey again tomorrow.


我们在绿林大道上长跑,
我们在绿林大道上相爱。
以青春抗击污浊龌龊的侵害,  
维护住自己神圣的冰清玉洁。
我的名字叫艾米, 爸爸妈妈都爱我(艾米唱);
外婆只要一有空, 就带我来练跑步。
欢声笑语飞扬起来(合唱),
生命之路向前延伸。
3
We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue,
We love each other on Greenwood Avenue.
You resisted the sordid infringements by your youth,
You’ve safeguarded your holy pureness and nobleness.
My name is Amy, dad and mommy love me(Amy sings);
So long as grandmother has leisure,leading me on a run.
Cheering and laughing are flying upward(Chorus),
The road of our life is going to extend.

我们在绿林大道上长跑(合唱),
我们在绿林大道上相爱。。。
We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue(Chorus),
We love each other on Greenwood Avenue。。。

淡入
·片头·
合亭。
石刻。
片名:《美国爱情故事》
《延伸》响起。
鸟瞰区域。
演职员名单。
绿林大道延伸。
字幕:2008年春季,伯利恒市,宾夕法尼亚州
绿林大道上,长跑的,滑板的,散步的,骑车的,运球的,玩耍的。
演职员名单。
草坪上,一女子,丢飞盘,狗儿蹿,张口接,再递送,循环着。
《延伸》止息。

Fade In

·Title·

Harmony Pavilion.
Carved Stone.
Title:America Love Story  
Going To Extend sounds.  
Aerially views the area.
The cast list.
Greenwood Avenue extends.
Subtitles:Spring 2008, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania.
On Greenwood Avenue, run, skateboard,walk, cycle, dribble,play.
The cast list.
On the lawn,there's a woman.She throws frisbee.The dog jumps,opens its mouth, holds in its teeth,and then delivers it. Circulates.
Going To Extend ceases.
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Re: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》

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·上部·
·Upperpart·

第一幕
Screen 1

1, 绿林大道,日,外
唐大之挺进。
玛格丽特
(挤眼)
他快到了。
乔安娜
(热身)
今天呢,你看好,我要超他八百米。
唐大之抵达,打招呼,邀请练。乔安娜和玛格丽特起步。唐大之跟着。玛格丽特停止。
玛格丽特
(喘息)
乔安娜是健将,你追得上她吗?
唐大之
试试看。
玛格丽特
怕不行。
唐大之
是吗?本来,女士就优先。现在,我甘拜下风。
俩人击掌。唐大之跑。
1,EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY  
Dazhi Tang marches.
MARGARET
(winking)
He's come over.
JOANNA
(warming up)
You see, I want to exceed him more than eight hundred meters today.
Dazhi Tang arrives, says hello, invites practice, Joanna and Margaret start. Dazhi Tang is behind. Margaret stops.
MARGARET
(gasping out)
Joanna is a sports athlete. Do you catch her up?
DAZHI TANG     
Let me try.
MARGARET
I’m afraid not.
DAZHI TANG
Really? Originally, lady first. Now, I candidly admit defeat.
They have gimme five. Dazhi Tang runs.

2,十字路口,日,外
碰上红灯。乔安娜停止。唐大之接近。
唐大之
我观察了,你有章法。跑二三步,吐一口气;跑二三步,吸一口气。专业选手?
乔安娜
不能划等号。而事实上是,在自由高中,我喜欢长跑,五千米赛季军。
唐大之
了不得!
乔安娜
谢谢你!绿灯了,开始吧。跟着我,别拉后!
2, EXT.CROSSROADS-DAY
Come across a red light. Joanna stops. Dazhi Tang closes.    
DAZHI TANG
I've observed, you had the rules. Ran two or three steps, breathed out one time; ran two or three steps,breathed in one time. Are you a proficient?
JOANNA
Can't equate. But in the fact, I liked a long-distance running in Freedom High School, and a third in five thousand meters competition.
DAZHI TANG
Extraordinary!
JOANNA
Thank you!The green light is on. Let's start. Follow me, don't lag!

3,绿林大道,日,外
唐大之加快。乔安娜罔顾,发现后阻拦。
乔安娜
(难为情)
喂,男子汉,你该不该让一让本姑娘?
唐大之
(躲避)
嘿,大小姐,你懂不懂赛场上有欺诈?
乔安娜
唐大之,装样子,搞偷袭,不算数!
唐大之
乔安娜,不要急,慢慢来,会赢的!
唐大之过马路。乔安娜遇红灯。
3, EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY  
Dazhi Tang accelerates. Joanna doesn't pay attention, obstructs after discovery.
JOANNA
(embarrassing)
Hello! Man, should you make a concession to this girl?
DAZHI TANG
(dodging)
Hey! Big missy, do you understand there seems fraud in the arena?
JOANNA
Dazhi Tang,pretended,snuck a attack,counted for nothing!
DAZHI TANG
Joanna,don't worry, take it easy, you'll win!
Dazhi Tang crosses the road. Joanna comes across a red light.
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Re: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》

文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週四 7月 13, 2017 12:05 pm

 

第二幕
Screen 2

4,绿林大道,日,外
乔安娜(V.O.)
唐大之,搞名堂,真讨厌!
唐大之走出树丛。
唐大之
飞毛腿,又领跑?!
乔安娜
(目不旁顾)
你会用心计,我斗不过你。
唐大之
开个玩笑,不要当真。我在后面,你获胜了。现在呢,请转身。
乔安娜照办。
唐大之
大小姐,大美女,大冠军,我们进行奥运会颁奖仪式。
唐大之献野花。乔安娜闻,开跑。唐大之跟着。
4, EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY
JOANNA(V.O.)
Dazhi Tang, did trick, how annoying!
Dazhi Tang runs out the bushes.
DAZHI TANG
Scud, have you led the running again?!
JOANNA
(seeing elsewhere)
You’d apply a scheme. I can't fight you.
DAZHI TANG
Just kidded around, didn't take it seriously. I'm behind you, you’ll win again. Now,please turn about.
Joanna does according to the request.
DAZHI TANG
Big missy, big beauty, big champion, we conduct Olympic Games Award Ceremony.
Dazhi Tang offers wildflower.Joanna smells,runs. Dazhi Tang follows.

5,合亭,日,外
玛格丽特叼烟,鼓掌。乔安娜冲刺。唐大之缓慢。
玛格丽特
(伸拇指)
怎么样?乔安娜很厉害?
唐大之
(作大揖)
领教了。果然身手不凡!
乔安娜
你谦虚。我属名不副实!
玛格丽特
乔安娜一米六五,但腿部发达修长;你身高一米八五,明显偏瘦肌肉少。因此,力量上存在差异。
唐大之
你是分析家,讲得有道理。
乔安娜
打住!玛格丽特,别再贫嘴。
5,EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-DAY
With a cigarette in her mouth,Margaret applauds. Joanna sprints. Dazhi Tang canters.
MARGARET
(stretching thumb)
How about? Is Joanna very powerful?
DAZHI TANG
(making a bow with hands folded in front)
I've received your prompt. A really and truly extraordinary skill!
JOANNA
You're modest. I belong to inaccurate designation!
MARGARET
Joanna is 1.65 meters,but her legs are very developed; your height is 1.85 meters, obviously trends thin. Therefore, there's a difference in the strength between you and Joanna.
DAZHI TANG
You're an analyst, put it right.
JOANNA
Stop!Margaret, not so loquacious.

6,合亭,日,外
玛格丽特
(不快)
乔安娜当运动员,很辛苦,是不是?那我作为大教练,大裁判,不重要?为什么少得一个?
唐大之
(笑嘻嘻)
对不起。本来完全相同。因你抽烟厉害,我就有意扣留。现在给你行吗?
玛格丽特
差不多。告诉你唐大之,我俩是表姐妹,我们又是朋友,必须一视同仁!
唐大之
好的。我会注意这个问题。
乔安娜给唐大之卷筒。
乔安娜
你没了。你也渴,快吃吧。
唐大之
你太客气。说句实话,你不了解。要在平时,我不会碰。
唐大之把卷筒还给乔安娜。
唐大之(CONT’D)
因为,世界卫生组织经过调查,得出结论:嗜糖有害,甚于抽烟。如果长期食用含糖量高的食品,人的健康会受到损害。
玛格丽特与乔安娜相觑。
6,EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-DAY  
MARGARET
(being unhappy)
As an athlete, Joanna worked hard, hasn't she been? Then I was a coach and referee, could it be said that it’s not important? Why have I got less?
DAZHI TANG
(laughing)
I'm sorry. Originally being the same. Because you smoked a bit much, so I deliberately reduced one piece. Now can I give you it?
MARGARET
Just about right. Tell you, Dazhi Tang, both of us are cousins, we are friends too. So you must treat us equally!
DAZHI TANG
All right! I'll pay attention to this problem.
Joanna gives Dazhi Tang a reel.
JOANNA
You haven't had. You're thirsty too, quickly eat.
DAZHI TANG
You're very kind. To be honest,you don't understand. In peacetime, I wouldn't touch.
Dazhi Tang returns the reel to Joanna.
DAZHI TANG(CONT’D)  
Because,World Health Organization has got the conclusion after investigation:there's a harmfulness to be addicted to sugar, more than smoking. If consume the food of high sugar content long, human health will be damaged.
Margaret and Joanna look each other.
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Re: (电影剧本)《美国爱情故事》

文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週六 7月 15, 2017 9:54 am

 

第三幕
Screen 3

7,绿林大道,日,外
唐大之
(忍耐不住)
你原来说笑时,嘴巴像朵花儿;飘来阵阵清香,撩拨心慌神乱;现在股股烟味,叫人生厌反感!
乔安娜
(支吾其词)
我是出于好奇,也才抽了几天;虽然是不太好,问题未必很大;因此可轻可重,为何意见尖锐?
唐大之
嘿,关系到你的健康!好,就算我多管闲事。
乔安娜
不,男子汉请宽容点!耶,小错误就放一马。
唐大之
大小姐,科学只会坚持正确的道理。
唐大之加速,跑开。
7,EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY
DAZHI TANG
(being unbearable)  
When you were chatting and laughing, your mouth looked like a piece of flower, floated a fitful fragrance, irresistibly drew my attention and interest. Just now, you’ve breathed out a whiff of cigarette smell, make people disgusting loathsomeness or repellence!
JOANNA
(prevaricating)
I was out of curiosity,have also smoked a few days. Although it's not very good,the problem isn't necessarily serious. Therefore it can be light or heavy. Why is your opinion so sharp?
DAZHI TANG
Hey! Relating to your health! Okay, even if I put my finger into another's pie.
JOANNA
No,man,please be tolerant!Yeah, only small error,then let someone off easy.
DAZHI TANG
Big missy, science will only adhere to the correct reason.
Dazhi Tang accelerates, runs along.

8,合亭,日,外
唐大之到达,喘息。
玛格丽特
不对啊,怎么啦,你比乔安娜快得多?
唐大之
乔安娜在抽烟,所以慢慢腾腾。你开心?
玛格丽特
(正中下怀)
乔安娜上瘾,来得非常快!
唐大之
(无可奈何)
你有意怂恿,顶教唆罪名!
玛格丽特
乔安娜是成人,已经快十九岁。
唐大之
哪怕九十九岁,信息必须良好。
玛格丽特
(阴毒)
哼,她只要一抽烟,你肯定会对立,还能多给卷筒?
唐大之
(激愤)
是,为了蝇头小利,你玩处心积虑,直接加害于人。。。
乔安娜跑至。唐大之打住,击掌,离开。
8, EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-DAY
Dazhi Tang arrives, gasps.
MARGARET
Amiss, what's wrong, are you more fast than Joanna?
DAZHI TANG
Joanna is smoking, so she is slow, are you happy?
MARGARET
(fitting in exactly with her wish)
Come very fast!Joanna has addicted.
DAZHI TANG
(feeling helplessness)
You've intended to instigate and got the instigation accusation!
MARGARET  
Joanna is an adult, almost nineteen years old.
DAZHI TANG
Even ninety-nine years old, the information must also be good.
MARGARET
(being insidious)
Hum, she only just needs smoking, you'll be certainly opposed,but also do you give more reel to her?
DAZHI TANG
(being indignant)
Yes,in order to petty profit,you’ve played the deliberateness,not hesitate to harm others。。。
Joanna arrives.Dazhi Tang stops. Everybody has gimme five. Dazhi Tang leaves.

9,合亭,傍晚,外
唐大之跑来。玛格丽特迎上,伸手。唐大之合拍,与乔安娜击掌。
玛格丽特
哎,伙计,怎么好几天不来练长跑?
唐大之
哦,小姐,我已经改成徒步上下班。
玛格丽特
为什么呢?不开车子?天天来回?有这么棒?
唐大之
因为很近,从家门口,到更衣室,十八分钟。
乔安娜
是喽,唐大之坚信健康就在于运动。
唐大之
谢谢!我还认为抽烟或许造成孱弱。
玛格丽特
你是很优秀的。但就这点不好,言词过于锋利。
9, EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-NIGHTFALL
Dazhi Tang comes. Margaret goes to meet, outstretches her hand. Dazhi Tang has gimme five, does with Joanna again.
MARGARET
Hey! Man, how many days haven't you practised a long-distance running?
DAZHI TANG
Oh! Miss, I've changed to going to work and getting off work on foot.
MARGARET
Why? Haven't you driven? Back and forth by running every day? Are you so strong?
DAZHI TANG
Because it's close. I spend eighteen minutes from my door to the locker room.
JOANNA
Yeah, you firmly believe health to depend on movement.
DAZHI TANG
Thank you! I also think that the smoking may result in weak.
MARGARET
You're very excellent. But this isn't good, your words are too incisive.
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文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週二 7月 18, 2017 9:28 am

 

第四幕
Screen 4

10,绿林大道,傍晚,外
唐大之
你太客气了。有话尽管说。
乔安娜
她抽烟少了。我已戒烟了。
唐大之
真得吗?大新闻。太好了!
乔安娜
是事实,我不敢,欺骗你。
唐大之
(叹为观止)
唉,根据经验,我很清楚。在生活中,谁肯听谁?所以你是,最好受众。就像璞玉,可以雕琢。因此,我真得感动至极。
乔安娜
(由衷欣慰)
那么你不生气了?那么我们和解了?那么又能练跑了?
唐大之
没有错,谢谢你!乔安娜。
乔安娜
谢谢你!唐大之,明天见。
唐大之
稍慢,我得送你一程。
乔安娜
你啊,始终滴水不漏。
俩人击掌,跑到。大家击掌。
10, EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-NIGHTFALL
DAZHI TANG
You're too polite. Have something to say as much as possible.
JOANNA
She's smoked less. I've quitted smoking.
DAZHI TANG
Really? Big news!Very good!
JOANNA
It's the fact. I don't dare to deceive you.
DAZHI TANG       
(being lost in wonder)
Haw!Based on experience, I knew very clearly, who is willing to listen to whom in life? So you're the best audience. You look like an unpolished jade that can be carved. Therefore, I've extremely touched.
JOANNA       
(sincerely gratifying)
Then you're not angry? Then we've reconciled? Then we can practice a running?
DAZHI TANG
Not wrong, thank you! Joanna.
JOANNA
Thank you! Dazhi Tang. See you tomorrow.
DAZHI TANG
Slightly slow, I've to send you a ride.
JOANNA
You're always watertight.
They have gimme five, arrive. Everyone has gimme five.

11,绿林大道,日,外
乔安娜在前,唐大之跟着。乔安娜放慢,唐大之合拍。
乔安娜
唐大之,就现在,能跟你聊一聊吗?
唐大之
乔安娜,想请示,我们聊十聊行吗?
乔安娜
唐大之,说句实话,我是当真的。
唐大之
乔安娜,不开玩笑,我很严肃的。
乔安娜
领教了,老江湖,特较劲!是这样的,玛格丽特,不好意思,要我转告,明天生日,你能助兴。
唐大之
芳龄多少?
乔安娜
二十三岁。
唐大之
我知道了。
乔安娜
麻烦你了。
唐大之
不必客气。
11, EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY
Joanna is in the front. Dazhi Tang follows. Joanna slows up. Dazhi Tang falls into step.
JOANNA
Dazhi Tang, right now, can we have a chat?
DAZHI TANG
Joanna, I want to ask for your instructions, can we chat for ten times?
JOANNA
Dazhi Tang, To be quite honest about it, I'm serious.
DAZHI TANG
Joanna, no kidding around, I'm very solemn.
JOANNA
Thanks for your advice. You 're an old traveler who has a lot of rivalry!Being such that, Margaret felt embarrassment, asked me for passing words on to you. She'll have a birthday tomorrow, can you add some fun of this thing?  
DAZHI TANG
How old is she?
JOANNA
Twenty-three years old.
DAZHI TANG
I knew.
JOANNA
Trouble you.
DAZHI TANG
You're welcome.

12,停车场,日,外
唐大之打开包装,盒里有水晶项链,请乔安娜帮忙。玛格丽特坚持,要唐大之戴上。
唐大之
(很紧张)
哎,颈脖也是女性性敏感区域!
玛格丽特
(放得开)
耶,你不就是喜欢靓丽的女子?
唐大之
大小姐所言极是。但不敢随便造次。
玛格丽特
我今天过生日啊,你就减压放松点。
唐大之
别怪我图谋肌肤之亲。
玛格丽特
没动真格,不必计较。
唐大之一瞥,乔安娜沉静, 了事。
12,EXT.PARKING LOT-DAY
Dazhi Tang opens the package, there's a piece of crystal necklace in the box, asks help from Joanna. Margaret persists, wants him to wear.     
DAZHI TANG
(being all nerves)
Hey! Also the neck is a woman’s gender sensitiveness area.
MARGARET
(being free)
Yeah! Don't you just like a beautiful female?
DAZHI TANG
What you said is very correct.But I don't dare to make rashness casually.
MARGARET
I have a birthday today, then you depressurize, relax.
DAZHI TANG
Don't blame me for attempting affections on your skin.
MARGARET
No real thing, don't care about.
Dazhi Tang shoots a glance. Joanna is peaceful. He finishes soon.
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文章redbluewhite85 發表於 週五 7月 21, 2017 10:57 am

 

第五幕
Screen 5

13,哈巴池烧烤店,晚,内
唐大之
哦,我们之间无禁忌。你喜欢就继续抽。只是要关注健康。
玛格丽特
那么要是我能够痛除嗜好,你不想我成为你的心上人?
乔安娜站起,跑开。
唐大之
实在高攀不起。你的名气很大。上过杂志封面。
《婚礼进行曲》响起。玛格丽特依偎唐大之肩头。
玛格丽特
实在太好听了。我真得沉醉了。
乔安娜回来,怔住,坐下。
唐大之
(洞察)
大小姐,怎么啦?很消沉?不开心?有心事?
乔安娜挤出微笑,失败,睑潮。
唐大之
哦,我必须马上调节乔安娜的情绪。
唐大之坐过去,挨得近。
13, INT.HIBACHI-STYLE GRILLING-EVENING
DAZHI TANG
Oh! There's no taboo between us. If you like it, you can continue smoking. Just be concerned about your health.
MARGARET
Then if I could vigorously abstain the addiction, don't you want me to become your sweetheart?
Joanna stands up, runs away.
DAZHI TANG
Really I can't afford to climb high. Your fame is great, pictured on magazine cover.
Wedding March sounds. Margaret snuggles up to Dazhi Tang's shoulder.  
MARGARET
This melody is very gorgeous,I'm really intoxicated.
Joanna comes back, stands in amazement, sits down.
DAZHI TANG
(catching)
Big missy, what's wrong? Very depressed? Unhappy? Worried about something?
Joanna squeezes out a smile,fails,her eyelid wets.
DAZHI TANG
Oh! I've to adjust Joanna's sentiment right away.
Dazhi Tang sits over there, gets close to Joanna.

14,合亭,傍晚,外
唐大之到。乔安娜等。
乔安娜
嘿,唐大之,你今天竟然迟到?
唐大之
哈,乔安娜,就你一个在这里?
乔安娜
怎么着,想念玛格丽特?
唐大之
没这事,仅问一下而已。  
乔安娜
但事实上,如此这般,前所未有。
唐大之
所言极是,不过每每,你们同来。
乔安娜
你横!怎么,又要开涮本姑娘?
唐大之
哪里,岂敢?大小姐是高贵者!
乔安娜
你很器重我?何处能琢磨?
唐大之
早在心坎上!跳跃升腾着!
14, EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-NIGHTFALL
Dazhi Tang comes. Joanna waits.
JOANNA
Hey!Dazhi Tang, do you go so far as to delay today?
DAZHI TANG
Ha, Joanna, only you’re here yourself?
JOANNA
What’s your meaning?Do you miss Margaret?
DAZHI TANG
No this matter, only ask nothing more.
JOANNA
But in the fact, thus and thus, unprecedented.
DAZHI TANG
Your words are extremely right. But you often come together.
JOANNA
Are you arbitrary?What’s wrong?Do you want to tease this girl again?  
DAZHI TANG
Oh, it’s nothing!Your big missy are a gentility!
JOANNA
Do you think highly of me?Where it can be figured out?
DAZHI TANG
In the bottom of my heart, it’s already saltatory, risen and emergent!
    
15,绿林大道,傍晚,外                      
乔安娜转身,冲刺。唐大之拦截。乔安娜不停,向前,朝左,往右。
唐大之
(不解)
乔安娜,大小姐,为什么没有微笑?  
乔安娜
(恼火)
唐大之,你真坏,难道只知道调侃?
唐大之
不会这样。然而,你这话意味着什么呢?         
乔安娜
说不清楚。不过,你不是向来很关注我?
唐大之
绝对如此!那我现在什么地方做得不好?
乔安娜
提个大醒!今天可是本姑娘十九岁生日。
15,EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-NIGHTFALL
Joanna turns round, sprints. Dazhi Tang intercepts. Joanna doesn’t stop, goes forward, goes left, goes right.
DAZHI TANG
(puzzling)
Joanna, big missy, why don’t you have a smile?
JOANNA
(annoying)
Dazhi Tang, you’re downright bad, surely it doesn’t mean that you only know mocking at me?
DAZHI TANG
Won’t like this. However, what have your words meant?
JOANNA
I can’t say clearly. Merely, haven’t you always paid close attention to me?
DAZHI TANG
Absolutely like that!What happened?Then haven’t I done well now?
JOANNA
Call a big attention to you!Today is this girl’s birthday of nineteen years old.
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