Come Back 'Cause...

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Seems like just yesterday
You were a part of me
Your arms surrounded me tight
Everthing that felt so right
Unbreakable like nothing could go wrong

Now I can't breathe
Now I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

When you left, I lost a part of me
It's so hard to believe
Come back babe please 'cause
Who else can I lean on when time gets through
Who can talk to me on phone till the sun comes up

Now I can't breathe
Now I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Here I am
Once again
I'm torn into pieces
The feeling I'm feeling
Now I don't hear your voice
Or have your touch and kiss

Just thought you were the one
Broke deep into my side
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these days since you left

Now I can't breathe
Now I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Guess I never could imagine
That I'd be sitting here myself
When you're on my mind
I only can think of you, I only can cry
Though I wanna try
To figure out where the hell I didn't make it right
(Make it right Make it right)

When you left, I lost a part of me
It's so hard to believe
Come back babe please 'cause
Who else can I lean on when time gets through
Who can talk to me on phone till the sun comes up

Now I can't breathe
Now I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Please come back babe
'Cause we belong together
(I only can think of you)
(I only can lean on you)

We belong togehter
No matter how far we exist
(Any mile)

Oh babe babe
Please come back 'cause
We belong together







後記:一邊聽著Hip-Hop跟R&B的英文廣播電台,一邊試著寫歌;這算是我第一次嘗試英文歌,寫得有些雜亂,但還是蠻喜歡的。

不會作曲,但想用藍調搖滾的方式來演唱這首歌。

這英文詞淺顯卻感人。

有時陳晞很疑惑,中文詞寫得不美,以英文抒寫,讀來就有平近的美。

Now I can't breathe
Now I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

短短三句不斷重覆呼喊,卻很深入人心。



陳晞

陳晞 寫:
有時陳晞很疑惑,中文詞寫得不美,以英文抒寫,讀來就有平近的美。
其實不會喔!

舉例來說吧,像電影「珍珠港」的主題曲,其實中文版阿妹唱的「排山倒海」就實在優美很多!