Mama

[紫陌]

Mama

Mama give me something warm.
Mama love me like the whisper.
Mama,her love in the drakness night.
Mama,her love in the lightness day.
I glance at mama's eyes.
See something get far away and old.

P.S這首英文詩雖很淺白，但是給我母親的，如有不對的地方，拜託指正，謝謝。

[葉優]

很喜歡這首
紫陌加油喔^ ^

PS:問題私訊再談

[ZY]

Mama

Mama gives me something warm. (三單)
Mama loves me like the whisper. (三單)
Mama, her love in the drakness night. (少了主詞)
Mama, her love in the lightness day. (少了主詞)
I glance at mama's eyes and
See something getting far away and old.

紫陌：
草草幫妳改了一下。

ZY

[紫陌]

謝謝ZY