shining eyes 試譯：閃亮的眼睛

[藍鳥]

Published on Dec 2, 2013
shining eyes

曲:Fred@HOME,Sam@HOME 詞:Fred@HOME 編曲:HOME

Verse:

Years have gone by. Through out the circuit, there's only you and I.
So I lie down just to rest here tonight. I hope my smile's on your mind.
Troubles and regrets. Troubles. Regrets. Oh man how could I ever forget?
All I can say - I'd done the best that I can.
To be a hero to every man.

Chorus:
Oh shine through your eyes, shine through your eyes.
I won't say goodbye, won't say goodbye. "It's not the end," with love I said.
I'll shine through your eyes, shine through your eyes.
I won't say goodbye, won't say goodbye. So remember. Oh , fred remember. Forever and ever.

Verse 2:
There'll be a time, a time you can't breath, you think you won't survive. Hold on tight, look straight and carry on.
The darkest hour before the dawn.
All that I am, all that I can be is what you'd left in me.
Five years' gone now, I'm still singing the song. Each phrase is heavy, keeping me strong.

Outro :
Years have gone by. Through out the circuit, there's only you and I.
So I lie down just to rest here tonight. I hope my smile's on your mind.

閃亮的眼睛

年月消逝。仍然活躍於中的，只餘下你和我
因此我今晚只想靜靜地躺下來稍作休息
我希望我的笑臉能留在你的腦海裡
煩擾和後悔，煩擾，後悔，啊 天 我怎可以忘記？
而我想說是.....我已經儘了最大的努力
成為每一個人心目中的英雄

啊 閃亮你的眼睛 閃亮你的眼睛
我不會說再見，永不說再見，〝那並不是絕路，〞我用真誠的愛而說
我可以照耀你的眼睛，照耀你的眼睛
我不會說再見，永不說再見，所以記著， 啊 弗萊得
記著，直到永遠

還有時間 ， 一些時間，你不能夠呼吸 ，你以為你不可以生存
請堅持，向前望和繼續
黑暗的日子會在黎明前消失
所有的我 ，所有我能夠做的都是你留下給我
五年時間過去，我仍然高唱我歌。每一句沉重句語，卻成為我變強的動力

年月消逝。仍然活躍於中的，只餘下你和我
因此我今晚只想靜靜地躺下來稍作休息
我希望我的笑臉能留在你的腦海裡

[麵糰仔]

To be honest,
I don't find this song particularly poetic.
In fact, it's rather cliche in my opinion.

Nice try though.

[藍鳥]

Hello 麵糰仔~~

Thanks for your comment .
I will try to translate poetic poem.
Love to read and love to write.
Best Regard!